You can break me
...and forget me
Throw me in the wilderness
and leave me there alone!
You can haunt me
You can taunt me
You can beat me
And try to defeat me!
The truth is, I can take it all!
And no matter what you do
Or how hard you try
I'll still be myself
And i will still survive...
Come on! Give me your best shot!
I'll come out much stronger!
first attempt at a "poem"
http://magpietales.blogspot.com/
powerful poem of surviving life's difficult times. well written.
RăspundețiȘtergereHe doesn't have a chance to defeat you. Good job!Me likes it :D
RăspundețiȘtergereYou go girl!
RăspundețiȘtergerea powerful spirit!!!:)
RăspundețiȘtergereway to go.
RăspundețiȘtergereyou are a real poet.
love your style.
xx
Passionate and with so much feeling in those words my friend. Loved it and thanks for linking with Potluck, can't wait to read more of your wonderful work. x
RăspundețiȘtergereGreat piece. Full of spirit and read out loud nicely. Well Done!
RăspundețiȘtergereenjoyed this. Wonderful first poem. l look forward to what you will do next! - bill
RăspundețiȘtergereI enjoyed your directness and your accompanying image (:
RăspundețiȘtergereSpirited poem. Well done and welcome to Potluck. Excellent choice of poem to submit.
RăspundețiȘtergerePoem on ...
Jamie Dedes
http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/11/08/my-sister-lives-too-far-away/
RăspundețiȘtergereawards for you.
Thanks for the lovely participation at JP.
Hope to see you next week.
xx